Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member 3180625 <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>. Can someone please review my personal statement for Navy ODS? 2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00 Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member 3180625 <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>. Can someone please review my personal statement for Navy ODS? 2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00 2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00 SFC Private RallyPoint Member 3181455 <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>sounds pretty good to me !! Response by SFC Private RallyPoint Member made Dec 18 at 2017 12:20 PM 2017-12-18T12:20:15-05:00 2017-12-18T12:20:15-05:00 Sgt Private RallyPoint Member 3181592 <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div><a class="dark-link bold-link" role="profile-hover" data-qtip-container="body" data-id="1411137" data-source-page-controller="question_response_contents" href="/profiles/1411137-pre-commission">Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member</a> I have read your statement twice, and found it to be well written. In the second to last sentence, consider changing &quot;truly gratified&quot; to &quot;deeply honored.&quot; Response by Sgt Private RallyPoint Member made Dec 18 at 2017 12:57 PM 2017-12-18T12:57:53-05:00 2017-12-18T12:57:53-05:00 2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00