https://www.rallypoint.com/answers/can-someone-please-review-my-personal-statement-for-navy-ods <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>. Mon, 18 Dec 2017 02:53:03 -0500 https://www.rallypoint.com/answers/can-someone-please-review-my-personal-statement-for-navy-ods <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>. Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member Mon, 18 Dec 2017 02:53:03 -0500 2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00 https://www.rallypoint.com/answers/can-someone-please-review-my-personal-statement-for-navy-ods?n=3181455&urlhash=3181455 <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>sounds pretty good to me !! SFC Private RallyPoint Member Mon, 18 Dec 2017 12:20:15 -0500 2017-12-18T12:20:15-05:00 https://www.rallypoint.com/answers/can-someone-please-review-my-personal-statement-for-navy-ods?n=3181592&urlhash=3181592 <div class="images-v2-count-0"></div><a class="dark-link bold-link" role="profile-hover" data-qtip-container="body" data-id="1411137" data-source-page-controller="question_response_contents" href="/profiles/1411137-pre-commission">Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member</a> I have read your statement twice, and found it to be well written. In the second to last sentence, consider changing &quot;truly gratified&quot; to &quot;deeply honored.&quot; Sgt Private RallyPoint Member Mon, 18 Dec 2017 12:57:53 -0500 2017-12-18T12:57:53-05:00 2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00