Would anyone be willing to look over my WOFT essay?

Sgt Spenser Jackson — Tue, 15 Dec 2020 20:15:30 -0500

I'm currently completing my packet for WOFT, and was wondering if anyone would be willing to give some feedback. If so I can send it via PM or email.

Response by SGT Joseph Gunderson made Dec 15 at 2020 8:21 PM

SGT Joseph Gunderson — Tue, 15 Dec 2020 20:21:18 -0500

When do you need it back? I'm not up to much these days.

Response by CW2 Private RallyPoint Member made Dec 16 at 2020 12:14 AM

CW2 Private RallyPoint Member — Wed, 16 Dec 2020 00:14:58 -0500

Best bet would be an Aviator or Enlisted recently selected to aviator...otherwise it's just a person who can probably run it through Word and Grammarly but doesn't know what the board is looking for.
I'd volunteer if you were looking for an EW Warrant, but I don't know what flight is looking for. I mean if you want a person with an MA to go over it send it, but it'll be in a general "is it written well" review rather than a "is this what Aviation Proponent is looking for" view.

BTW being a radio operator, have you looked at applying for Army EW Warrant Officer, we're growing rapidly and need people, you should be fine if you have RadBn experience.

Response by CW2 Private RallyPoint Member made Dec 16 at 2020 9:35 AM

CW2 Private RallyPoint Member — Wed, 16 Dec 2020 09:35:03 -0500

Message me personally and I’ll send you my email

Response by COL Kelly Hines made Dec 17 at 2020 12:29 PM

COL Kelly Hines — Thu, 17 Dec 2020 12:29:31 -0500

I'll take a look if you want. Seen a lot of them as the Commandant of the WOCC.

Response by SPC Marvin Diamond made Dec 24 at 2020 5:04 PM

SPC Marvin Diamond — Thu, 24 Dec 2020 17:04:39 -0500

I have a degree in journalism and grad school English. I can check it for grammar and cogency. Send it to: [login to see]