Posted on Jul 14, 2016
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LTC Paul Heinlein
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1SG (Join to see) ,
The Typical Format I have used is:
-Name / Title
-Intro paragraph (nicknamed-best thing since sliced bread)
- Then I have a paragraph in narrative for each assignment stating all the great things they did.
The assignment paragraphs are in order as they happened e.g. oldest to newest
- The final paragraph I have kept like an award narrative.
I have submitted about 3 for Silver (20 yrs+) and another handful for Bronze (10 yrs or more) that have been awarded.
For Bronze Submissions...I would try to keep it to 2-3 pages.
For Silver Submissions...I would try to keep to 5-7 pages or less.
The Achievements typically speak for themselves.

If you want an actual copy on one I submitted (names, dates, etc. scrubbed), private message me your email.

Good Luck,
Paul
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LTC Paul Heinlein,
Thanks for the path to success. I'll get it hammered out and in the pipeline so it can be awarded at the BN Dining Out.

Thanks,
James
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LTC Paul Heinlein
LTC Paul Heinlein
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I sent you an example to your .mil account. Sorry, I had not previously noticed you had put your email address in the question thread. Good Luck
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LTC Stephen F.
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Since you posted this to the MP community I expect that is a Provost Marshal order 1SG (Join to see)
Ladies and gentlemen since you are MPs I am mentioning you in the hopes that one of more may be able to help SGM David W. Carr LOM, DMSM MP SGT SFC William Farrell SFC James BaberCOL Jean (John) F. B. CPT (Join to see) LTC Yvonne Doll SGM Lonnie Durand MSG Carolyn Emery COL T.J. Farrell SSG Pete Fleming 2LT Jeff FortinCSM David Heidke LTC Paul Heinlein MAJ (Join to see) SGM Robert Kendall SSG Paul Lanciault MSG Donald R. Lee, M.B.A. SGT Kathleen Light CPT Chris Loomis
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Edited 8 y ago
First time I have ever heard of this award.I have heard of the Order of St. George for Armor but not this one for MPs.
http://www.wood.army.mil/engrmag/PDFs/Spring%2011/Derasmo%20and%20Kemp.pdf
SFC William Farrell LTC Stephen F. COL Mikel J. Burroughs COL John Cole SSG James J. Palmer IV aka "JP4" SSG Derrick L. Lewis MBA, C-HRM SGT (Join to see) SGT Robert George PFC Talal Al-Tunsi CPT L S CPT Pedro Meza MAJ David Potter
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