SGT Private RallyPoint Member6112697<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>Throughout my military career I’ve shown my superiors that I am adaptive, and innovative,<br />tactically and technically competent in my skills as a Fire Support Specialist. My work ethic and<br />intrinsic motivation allow me to exceed expectations at every duty position I have held. As a<br />Private First Class I served in one grade above my own, and as a specialist I served in the<br />position of Sergeant while earning two Army Achievement Medals (AAM’s) for excellence and<br />out-performing my peers. Within the first month that I was in my secondary zone, my command<br />sent me to the Sergeant promotion board where I was a first time go. As soon as I was<br />promotable, I was entrusted with an NCO role and was promoted to Corporal. Additionally, upon<br />graduating the Basic Leaders Course, I made the Commandant’s List for having a Grade Point<br />Average in the top 5% of my class and by recommendation of my instructors for outstanding<br />performance. Once I was promoted to Sergeant, I Immediately filled the role of Fire Support<br />Sergeant, which is a billeted Staff Sergeant position. I have since earned two Army<br />Accommodation Medals (ARCOM’s) for my performance in said role. (Mention JFO)<br />I would now like to take on another challenging role and become an aviation Warrant<br />Officer, and use my drive and dedication to country to do my part in bettering the flight<br />community.”Can a Warrant Officer or two critique my first summary paragraph for my application?2020-07-18T05:56:04-04:00SGT Private RallyPoint Member6112697<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>Throughout my military career I’ve shown my superiors that I am adaptive, and innovative,<br />tactically and technically competent in my skills as a Fire Support Specialist. My work ethic and<br />intrinsic motivation allow me to exceed expectations at every duty position I have held. As a<br />Private First Class I served in one grade above my own, and as a specialist I served in the<br />position of Sergeant while earning two Army Achievement Medals (AAM’s) for excellence and<br />out-performing my peers. Within the first month that I was in my secondary zone, my command<br />sent me to the Sergeant promotion board where I was a first time go. As soon as I was<br />promotable, I was entrusted with an NCO role and was promoted to Corporal. Additionally, upon<br />graduating the Basic Leaders Course, I made the Commandant’s List for having a Grade Point<br />Average in the top 5% of my class and by recommendation of my instructors for outstanding<br />performance. Once I was promoted to Sergeant, I Immediately filled the role of Fire Support<br />Sergeant, which is a billeted Staff Sergeant position. I have since earned two Army<br />Accommodation Medals (ARCOM’s) for my performance in said role. (Mention JFO)<br />I would now like to take on another challenging role and become an aviation Warrant<br />Officer, and use my drive and dedication to country to do my part in bettering the flight<br />community.”Can a Warrant Officer or two critique my first summary paragraph for my application?2020-07-18T05:56:04-04:002020-07-18T05:56:04-04:001SG Private RallyPoint Member6112736<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>Why are you posting as a PV2 on the site?Response by 1SG Private RallyPoint Member made Jul 18 at 2020 6:17 AM2020-07-18T06:17:38-04:002020-07-18T06:17:38-04:00CW2 Private RallyPoint Member6113718<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>I would update your profile to reflect your current rank. As for the summary, my recommendation is to talk more about why you want to be a Warrant Officer and Army Aviator. What kind of Officer will you become? They can see on your ERB what awards you have so I would use that space to sell yourself as to why the Army should trust you with multi-million dollar aircraft and the lives in the back. Feel free to message me with anything else, I'd be glad to help.Response by CW2 Private RallyPoint Member made Jul 18 at 2020 12:26 PM2020-07-18T12:26:55-04:002020-07-18T12:26:55-04:00PVT Private RallyPoint Member7696369<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>At least for me, I think it's quite good. I'm not a professional writer, but I enjoy your essay! Personally, I purchase all of my essay assignments. If you require assistance, go to <a target="_blank" href="https://norfolkhomelearning.com/">https://norfolkhomelearning.com/</a> They deliver high-quality papers that are free of plagiarism to pupils. All essays and other papers given by their organization are written by actual experts with extensive academic writing experience. <div class="pta-link-card answers-template-image type-default">
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Response by PVT Private RallyPoint Member made May 26 at 2022 7:11 AM2022-05-26T07:11:56-04:002022-05-26T07:11:56-04:002020-07-18T05:56:04-04:00