Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member3180625<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>.Can someone please review my personal statement for Navy ODS?2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member3180625<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>.Can someone please review my personal statement for Navy ODS?2017-12-18T02:53:03-05:002017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00SFC Private RallyPoint Member3181455<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div>sounds pretty good to me !!Response by SFC Private RallyPoint Member made Dec 18 at 2017 12:20 PM2017-12-18T12:20:15-05:002017-12-18T12:20:15-05:00Sgt Private RallyPoint Member3181592<div class="images-v2-count-0"></div><a class="dark-link bold-link" role="profile-hover" data-qtip-container="body" data-id="1411137" data-source-page-controller="question_response_contents" href="/profiles/1411137-pre-commission">Cadet CPT Private RallyPoint Member</a> I have read your statement twice, and found it to be well written. In the second to last sentence, consider changing "truly gratified" to "deeply honored."Response by Sgt Private RallyPoint Member made Dec 18 at 2017 12:57 PM2017-12-18T12:57:53-05:002017-12-18T12:57:53-05:002017-12-18T02:53:03-05:00