Does anyone have a bullet for a PCS award for a Soldier who completed ESB?

Very familiar with these types of award bullets. SFC (Join to see), re-whicker this as needed. This one bullet para combined with the other three paras should help paint the total Soldier picture...and don't forget to touch on the "impact" of the achievement, not just the achievement itself. Good luck.

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By earning the Expert Soldier Badge (ESB), [Soldier's Name] has demonstrated the highest standards of excellence and has proven [himself/herself] as a consummate professional, embodying the Army Values and Warrior Ethos. [His/Her] accomplishment in successfully completing the rigorous ESB requirements demonstrated an unwavering determination, physical fitness, and mastery of critical soldiering tasks. The ESB is a mark of personal recognition, yet [he\she] has also earned the respect and admiration of fellow soldiers and leaders, inspiring others in the unit to strive for excellence.
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Basic bullet:

"Soldier earned coveted Expert Soldier Badge, finishing xx out of xx students." But without knowing anymore details, that's the best I could come up with

SFC Sevel, not trying to be rude here, we would have to know all about the course and how well he did, like any other training environment.