Warrant Officer packet corrections?

I was FQNS on the September warrant board, I've adjusted a few things with the packet, could anyone look at it and give me some advice, specifically my resume.my stats are sfc, 12 years in, no afs waiver required as of now. 11B, all the schools an infantryman could have.letters of recommendation from w4,w5, cpt,LTC, and col.