Socioeconomic Challenges -A Global Perspective Evaluating Invisible Connections-Resolutioning A...

If you want to get more people to read your post, try putting some names a people you have read articles from in rallypoint. Sometimes you have people who submit 30 or 40 stories a day and your personal story may not get the review you expect. I'm driving home from work shortly I'll read it later. Thank you for paper!

The paper needs a clear thesis and defined points that defend the thesis sentence. I did not get that at all in this paper. The paper shifts from different topics as if they have already been proven which they simply have not been. Sustainability, for example, has been explored and popularized ever since Aldo Leopold wrote A Sand County Almanac. Conservation in America has disproven your comments. One can simply study a Big Buck Management Program in any State in America to determine the sustainability of but one species. The troubling part for me was the assault of the individual for the collective soul. Where have we heard this and where have we seen it actually be successful? The entire American experiment is based on the Rights, Freedom, and Liberty of the Individual. Religion is obviously absent from this paper. I would wager that is not by accident but by design. I'd like to give it another read one it is cleaned up so I could offer a better critique point by point once they are clearly articulated and defended with facts.

Your premise and thesis was quite clear to me and sound when we consider Maslow's hierarchy and systems theory. Holism cannot be true in one nation and not another. These theories apply to individual health, and impact the family, the community, the state, the nation, the world, the galaxy, and the universe. Socioeconomics of a community is as relevant as that of the global community. It is simply a perspective which nationalists will not agree with and globalists will understand the intersections of the web of human need. I would suggest examples where global efforts have succeeded beyond marine life. Where has collaborative efforts been effective? If a cancer invades a body, the weaker constitution will succumb to opportunistic infections. (Corruption, environmental decay, violence, crime, disease, etc) Human nature has shown a violent, survivalist penchant since our earliest evolution. As a species, we are predators and changing that nature is to ask the lion to sleep with the lamb. There will always be lambs and lions. Efforts to improve the lives of Afghanistan's citizens has not stopped the eons of tribal violence. Culture, human nature, religion, and opportunistic societies ultimately determine our global fate as a species. Perhaps education is the true solution not redistribution of wealth. Interesting read and I enjoyed your prose.