Posted on Jul 15, 2020
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As a Battalion Commander, what would you like to see in a Lieutenant's introduction letter? As an LT, what did you put in yours?

Disclaimer: I'm asking what categories should be touched on, not what one should specifically write to try to "get ahead" or some such thing.
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MAJ John Adams
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Is this a thing now? What an unmitigated waste of effort! It's not like the BN CO is deciding whether or not to hire the 2LT. He doesn't need a resume -- he already knows your qualifications, and knows what he expects. He'll tell you what he expects if you're lucky, and if you're not lucky, you'll find out if you fall sort of expectations. Work with your company CO. He'll have far more influence over your career, and will spot problem areas in sufficient time to fix them.
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CPT John Kane
CPT John Kane
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As a 2LT it was always my platoon sergeant that made the difference in my life! Troop Commander was also a good mentor and if I really wanted some hard core advice it was the 1st Sergeant ("Top") that I go have a beer with.
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MAJ John Adams
MAJ John Adams
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And as a battalion staff officer, your man with the inside dope is the CSM. The XO is a good source, but the CSM knows all of your people far better than you do when you first take your place among the warlords.
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MAJ Byron Oyler
MAJ Byron Oyler
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My first few assignments in the nurse corps I would send these letters and then I realized they did not matter and stopped sending them. I also believe in showing up, shutting up, and doing your job.
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CPT Aaron Kletzing
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As a new 2LT when I reached my first unit -- the Battalion Commander's letter that I received clearly laid out what he saw as the top 3 expectations that he had for all LTs in his battalion. Laid it out clear and simple -- "This is what I expect of you -- these are the high standards that I expect you to meet in my battalion." I liked this approach a lot.
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CPT Aaron Kletzing
CPT Aaron Kletzing
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Oh jeez, I think I mis-read your question, ha. -- my updated answer would be to lay out the expectations and high standards that you have for yourself, introduce yourself (quick bio, avoid cliches), and convey how motivated you are to exceed goals.
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SSG Bill Moore
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How about, Sir, I'm a new lieutenant and I don't know shit and therefore I must be trained accordingly by my platoon sergeant. If prior service or prior enlisted, then a bio would suffice. Just throwing that out there
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SSG Bill Moore
SSG Bill Moore
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Will do! She said hi! Oh and she loves you too
Aww so sweet! I love playing match maker❤
Good day Sir! Always WY6
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SSG Bill Moore
SSG Bill Moore
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No offense. I had to f*ck with you, like the numerous other lieutenants who wanted to kill me. My apologies if I took it too far
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1LT Infantry Officer
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SSG Bill Moore haha no worries there! Some (some) of us can take it
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SSG Bill Moore
SSG Bill Moore
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God damn right!!
Follow Me! (now it's to the fridge)
Stay frosty and do them 11A's good and those 11Z too!
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As a Battalion Commander, what would you like to see in a Lieutenant's introduction letter? As an LT, what did you put in yours?
MAJ(P) G9
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I don’t think that I’ve ever seen one of these. Honestly, a letter isn’t going to mean much. First impressions are important. However, most people want those in person, not in writing. Make an acceptable in person first impression by being professional and humble. Then consistently learn and get better. That will be your key to success.
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CPL Douglas Chrysler
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The last time I praised a 2 LT, who just happened to be a great CO, I endured a huge personal attack. So much so that I nearly launched a search for the person. It took 3 of my lawyer friends to point out the folly of destroying the fellow. So, good luck getting a truely candid answer.
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CWO3 Us Marine
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A new Marine was recognized and introduced at a Hail & Farewell with their peers. The rest is above my pay grade. Some BN Cmdrs would have a private talk with key leaders. Some wanted to meet every new Officer. One CG, a Navy Cross recipient, met with newly joined Os in a small group to welcome them aboard. The same practice applied to SNCOs and the Sgt Maj. Beyond that, you were pictured in the BN Command photo. Your true introduction came through your actions once aboard.
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MAJ Matthew Arnold
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Wow, the army has really changed. We didn't give the battalion commander a letter back in 1981. In fact, when I reported to my BN CO at 1/508 Inf. 82nd Abn. my battalion commander gave me about 1 minute of his time and then had my CO take me out of his office, pronto. You're just another green butter bar on OJT and he'll find out in a few months if he wants to give you a company command or not. Do your best and keep your nose clean, that's your introduction letter.
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1LT Project Manger / Systems Architect
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Edited 5 y ago
I did not give a letter (no such thing at the time and why would you? The man has access to your personnel file?) I had had cards made, so I asked the S1 if he had a silver plate, which he did, and placed a card upon it for him to take into the BN CDR's office when he had time. A time honored tradition; a new Officer would actually appear in dress uniform at the Commander's home and place his card on a Silver slaver, where upon he may or may not be invited in for coffee or tea (usually not.) A long time ago, nowadays, I'm afraid. And definitely NOT a good idea to show up to anyone's home nowadays! Especially your BN/BDE Commander's!
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MAJ Ronnie Reams
MAJ Ronnie Reams
5 y
Yep, but when I did it one card for each adult member of household.
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COL Vincent Contreras
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Edited 5 y ago
Attach a cover letter to your standard military bio with some or all of the following content.
Introduction:
Background: Brief summary of your personal background...
Attitudes: I am dedicated...
Abilities/Strengths: I am especially proficient...
Anticipation: I am looking forward to...
Expectations for Personal Growth: Briefly describe what you expect to gain from this assignment
Introduce spouse and children if applicable.
Sign off with personal statement regarding your commitment and service.

I believe something along these lines would make a good first impression with you new commanders and will create the impression of good initiative on your part.
Best wishes for an excellent career...

P.S. I remember that I wrote something but it's been so long ago I have no recollection of what I wrote to my company commander.
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SFC Don Ward
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First I ever heard of a LT doing an "intro letter" to their new Bn Cdr. Kind of apalled at the idea.
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1LT Medical-Surgical Nurse
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Fantastic question.
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LTC Operations Research/Systems Analysis
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Waste of time. Don't do one unless specifically asked to. To your BC, just keep your head down and blend in. To your CO, report, then respond to his/her questions & guidance. Make yourself approachable but don't be too forward. With your PSG, should you start as a PL, just ask how you can help and what you can do to learn. Think of your first assignment as OJT or an internship.
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Sgt Dale Briggs
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Just my .02. As a 2nd LT I’m supposing your troops look at you as about equal to a new Pvt, they don't expect much, and especially not to make their jobs worse or harder to do. You can save the gung ho stuff right off the bat all you’ll just get is sideways looks. Your best friend is your Plt Sgt, he has all the experience that you lack, more than likely he also has the full respect of the guys under him. Your whole word includes your Sr NCOs and your Company Commander, that’s about it, you lead by letting the Sr NCOs lead and do their thing, when their in compliance of every aspect of day to day life you throw your weight behind them and they’re your go between with your Jr Enlisted. Your BC knows who you are, if everything is right under you your good, why’s he need an introduction letter, he has your jacket. You need to know something you probably don’t go to your CC you go to your 1st Sgt, close the door and ask, he has the experience to help you, and there’s probably not much he hasn’t seen.
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SMSgt Sheila Berg
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SNCO's have a lot of experience. 2nd Let's need to keep that in mind.
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MAJ Infantry Officer
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LT introduction letter? Never heard of it.
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MAJ Tracy Pim
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what in the hell is an introduction letter????
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LTC Robin P.
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Is this some kind of requirement? If it is, then I would just send a copy of my ORB (that is, in fact, your military resume... the DO still have ORBs, I hope??), and my cover letter would only say something like, "I look forward to serving in (insert unit name here). My goals for this tour are personal growth as an officer and to learn as much as I can from my fellow service members."
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MAJ Matthew Arnold
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Edited 5 y ago
My second comment: If the army expects you to do this then: Keep it short, keep it simple, keep it real.

Back in my day we did not write letters of intro to the BN CO. I was a battalion XO and I spent about 12 years on battalion and brigade level staff. From that experience I would almost guarantee you that the BN CO or Bde. CO is going to had your letter to the OX with barely a glance at it. He has seen several LTs come and go. No letter is going to sway his judgement of you. So, keep it short, keep it simple, keep it real, or you will have the adverse effect of what you wish for.

(I can hear it now, "Who does this f***ing lieutenant think he is?", and that's not the way you want the BN CO to remember your name.)
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