Officer Candidate School (OCS) Instructor on RallyPoint

Before making the decision to enlist in the Army, My fiancee and I began to plan our wedding due to the fact that her family is from abroad and we wanted to allow a reasonable amount of notice for them to be able to accumulate the funds for travel expenses. During that time period I became interest...

Hello. This is specialist moon, been in army active duty around 2 years now. I am planning on going ocs next year if possible. Before I drop my packet I want to know exactly how much i will be obligated to serve when I become an officer. I have contacted and googled everywhere but could not find the...

This is draft 2 of my essay. There was a lot of great feed back from the community and I am looking for more critiques. My biggest problem personally is that I am having a hard time stream lining it. I believe there is too much fluff in certain areas and not enough detail in others. Thank you for any help.

 

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Any critiques for my essay as to "why I want to be an officer" would be greatly appreciated. I am currently working on my packet for OCS. I am prior enlisted Army SGT (13B), with a degree in Homeland Security and Emergency Management.

 

I have always had a desire to serve and be a part of something b...

I graduated with a BA in Finance in 2015 and am now looking to fulfill a goal of mine, which is an MS in Finance. I'm 26 right now and would be 29 by the end of my program. That said, Commissioning as a 2nd LT has always been a dream and after a few years in the corporate world as a civilian, I'm be...