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Does anyone else feel less accomplished after writing a command bio? I just got finished writing mine, thinking I have done all this great stuff for the last 12 years...and my Bio was summed up in 4 paragraphs. I guess I won’t be writing a memoir anytime soon.
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No disrespect, but the first thing that came to my mind Sir was "he's only a 2ndLt, of course it's only 4 paragraphs!" However, what the smartarse part of me left I understood that 12 years of service means you are Mustang and have more to offer in your "future memoir" Bio.
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Capt (Join to see) - I agree with LTC Paul Labrador. The FLARNG state headquarters sends out regular selection announcements which include bios of the leadership. You really want to highlight your humble beginnings, key positions, deployments, military and civilian schools, awards, and if you wish - a quick sentence or two on where you live, your wife and children's names, etc.
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I have never even written mine...never had a duty title or requirement that needed it! not to mention, don't want to really see how pathetic I really look on paper!! hard to be a legend in my own mind if I have to face reality!! ;-)
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The official bio really does nothing but list duty stations, assignments and awards so yes, when you break it down it does look like you've done nothing. If it wasn't for line and spacing requirements, you could fit everything on 1 page. Whatever it looks like, just remember, it was done it in an orderly, proficient military manner. :-)
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ooops...man, I gotta learn to read before I respond! MAJ Robert (Bob) Petrarca I'll just go over here in my corner and sharpen some crayons......
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I have just updated my bio. I got this format from Chaplain's Captain Career Course. I will try to attach this document.
Pro Deo et Patria
Chaplain Scott Fluegel (RET)
See my comments to this post, for my Chaplain's Bio.
Pro Deo et Patria
Chaplain Scott Fluegel (RET)
See my comments to this post, for my Chaplain's Bio.
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You think that's hard...try writing your epitaph in 140 characters or less.
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HAHA yeah I think it stems from having to get a years worth of acomplishments into 11 line for the FITREP Sir
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Did my BIO for the next change of responsibility I am having in January, and it is the typical, joined here, went there, earned this and have this for family support. It is the quick down and dirty with awards and duty locations for the folks attending your C of C/C of R to get a slightly small look into who you are without the deep dive. Your command time will surely tell all interested in WHO you are a lot more about you and the line when you change OUT will not get but a mere update of your tour as a command team player.
One page, hit ya in the face, down and dirty.
When you really to summarize your career, try to write that 1500-2500 word essay for a regimental award recognition, then it gets a lot more into the weeds and sharing more about you. Often a pain to do, but necessary to have when you get closer to retirement as leaders look for other types of ways to show gratification of your service.
My simple .02.
One page, hit ya in the face, down and dirty.
When you really to summarize your career, try to write that 1500-2500 word essay for a regimental award recognition, then it gets a lot more into the weeds and sharing more about you. Often a pain to do, but necessary to have when you get closer to retirement as leaders look for other types of ways to show gratification of your service.
My simple .02.
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