Posted on Jul 14, 2016
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LTC Paul Heinlein
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The Typical Format I have used is:
-Name / Title
-Intro paragraph (nicknamed-best thing since sliced bread)
- Then I have a paragraph in narrative for each assignment stating all the great things they did.
The assignment paragraphs are in order as they happened e.g. oldest to newest
- The final paragraph I have kept like an award narrative.
I have submitted about 3 for Silver (20 yrs+) and another handful for Bronze (10 yrs or more) that have been awarded.
For Bronze Submissions...I would try to keep it to 2-3 pages.
For Silver Submissions...I would try to keep to 5-7 pages or less.
The Achievements typically speak for themselves.

If you want an actual copy on one I submitted (names, dates, etc. scrubbed), private message me your email.

Good Luck,
Paul
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LTC Paul Heinlein,
Thanks for the path to success. I'll get it hammered out and in the pipeline so it can be awarded at the BN Dining Out.

Thanks,
James
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LTC Paul Heinlein
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I sent you an example to your .mil account. Sorry, I had not previously noticed you had put your email address in the question thread. Good Luck
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LTC Stephen F.
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Since you posted this to the MP community I expect that is a Provost Marshal order 1SG (Join to see)
Ladies and gentlemen since you are MPs I am mentioning you in the hopes that one of more may be able to help SGM David W. Carr LOM, DMSM MP SGT SFC William Farrell SFC James BaberCOL Jean (John) F. B. CPT (Join to see) LTC Yvonne Doll SGM Lonnie Durand MSG Carolyn Emery COL T.J. Farrell SSG Pete Fleming 2LT Jeff FortinCSM David Heidke LTC Paul Heinlein MAJ (Join to see) SGM Robert Kendall SSG Paul Lanciault MSG Donald R. Lee, M.B.A. SGT Kathleen Light CPT Chris Loomis
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LTC Stephen Conway
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First time I have ever heard of this award.I have heard of the Order of St. George for Armor but not this one for MPs.
http://www.wood.army.mil/engrmag/PDFs/Spring%2011/Derasmo%20and%20Kemp.pdf
SFC William Farrell LTC Stephen F. COL Mikel J. Burroughs COL John Cole SSG James J. Palmer IV aka "JP4" SSG Derrick L. Lewis MBA, C-HRM SGT (Join to see) SGT Robert George PFC Talal Al-Tunsi CPT L S CPT Pedro Meza MAJ David Potter
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Does anyone have an example of a recommendation for the Order of the Marechaussee that was approved?
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There is an example and application on the MPRA Web Site
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1SG i'll look it up when I get to office
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SSG Security Specialist
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It can only be issues by the MP Commandant and only MPRA members can recommend or receive it
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1SG Joseph Yorski, MHS
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I can't lay hands on mine until Monday, but sure.
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I'm currently on leave but if you send me an email I'll respond as soon as I can. You can find me in the Outlook Global Address List.
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Thanks!
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1SG (Join to see) - I just sent to your official email. I hope it helps.
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CPT Chris Loomis
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Unfortunately the only advice for an example I have was already stated by SSG John Stinson
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MSG Micheal P Floyd Jr
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I don't know if this is what you are speaking of, but on google.com search for the following: ABCMR Record of Proceedings (cont) AR [login to see] 5 RECORD OF ...
boards.law.af.mil/ARMY/BCMR/CY2005/ [login to see] 5C070206.doc
... of the Legion of Merit, the Order of the Marechaussee in Bronze award certificate, ... The applicant's DD Form 214 for the period ending 6 January 2004 shows he ... that the evidence presented was sufficient to warrant a recommendation for ...
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I think the link came out broken, lol
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MSG Micheal P Floyd Jr
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... my apologies "TOP", for the link works precisely for myself... Please try again.
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