Posted on Dec 30, 2015
SGM Mikel Dawson
22.9K
86
58
20
19
1
I've been told a few times to write my own NCOER. To this I replied, "I will provide you with input of what I have done during my rating period, but I will not do your job for you." Because one time I had to push the issue up the Chain of Command, I received a NCOER which virtually said I could breath and was alive. I was lucky, it had no effect on my career, but I know it can happen. Again I call this poor leadership.
Avatar feed
Responses: 32
Votes
  • Newest
  • Oldest
  • Votes
LTC Stephen F.
8
8
0
That is interesting SGM Mikel Dawson, several times I was asked to draft input to my awards or OERs. I always drafted the NCOERs for those NCOs who served under me.
I concur if a superior officer or NCO tells you to draft your own NCOER that is indicative of poor leadership or laziness or both.
(8)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
CW2 Ernest Krutzsch
7
7
0
Better yet, how many have been told to write their own award?
(7)
Comment
(0)
SSG Dwight Amey MSA, MSL, BS, AS
SSG Dwight Amey MSA, MSL, BS, AS
>1 y
A majority including my retirement, so I just wrote up a arcom and called it a day. Seem to do missions and little time for myself. Got to the point of missing deadlines and wanted the process to get moving. But.. someone in my Battalion or Brigade bumped it up to meritorious medal, which I did not write.
(0)
Reply
(0)
MSG Intermediate Care Technician
MSG (Join to see)
>1 y
SSG Dwight Amey MSA, MSL, BS, AS - Well, that was nice of them.
(0)
Reply
(0)
SSG Warren Swan
SSG Warren Swan
>1 y
Had to write mine and another NCO's end of tour awards in the Stan. His team sgt didn't care (rotations had begun), and his OIC didn't either. He wanted him to get an ARCOM and this NCO PUT IN SOME WORK on his ETT team. I was the team sergeant for the other. I wrote his award using my bullets trying to get him a BS (he deserved it). His OIC was not having it, and wanted an ARCOM. I talked him into a MSM. The NCO got his MSM and I was proud, but when I submitted my award to 4/25, it was a BS with recommendations from my BN CDR to approve and it was knocked down to an ARCOM. I was butthurt, but I got to laugh a bit being another Soldier got a higher award using what I was going to use in mine. Sometimes you can loose but win, and that NCO is my friend to this day.
(0)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
SSG Warren Swan
4
4
0
I've done it and I was told it was good training and no one knows what you did better than you. The downside to this was the eval was still redinked, and sent back and not just for the usual corrections. I feel if I ask a Solder to write his NCOER, and he writes in there he saved 30kittens while running 12minutes during the run portion of the APFT, and he gives himself an 'excellent ', I know I'm not going to like it, but that's what I asked him to do. I can tell him to go back and reword it. He could tell me no being I tasked him to do it and heaven help me if I didn't do his counseling. I think it's a great mentoring tool, but it should be done by the rater. Or both could using the bullets the Soldier had and he and his rater go over how to use them, what they really mean, and how those 'high speed' bullets can help/harm his future career in regards to SNCO boards. Don't think they'll care about him saving 30 kittens during the run.
(4)
Comment
(0)
SGM Steve Wettstein
SGM Steve Wettstein
>1 y
SSG Warren Swan Good post Warren. I got a good chuckle on the kittens and the 2 mile bullet. I have seen some weird shit from my peers that liked to write their own NCOERs and lets say embellish just a little on the bullets.
(1)
Reply
(0)
CW3 Jim Norris
CW3 Jim Norris
>1 y
Well said - one of my favorite mythical OER comments was - 'the only reason for this officer to continue on active duty would be idle curiosity on the part of his commander as to what he will do next'.
(2)
Reply
(0)
SSG Warren Swan
SSG Warren Swan
>1 y
I think the "art" of writing the NCOER is fading away. Before the world sends SEAL RANGER TEAM 007 to destroy me hear me out; when I was a young NCO there were the examples that were REALLY used from old NCOER's. My NCO's would give reasoning as to why this was this and that was that. It gave perspective on what you should really be striving for. After awhile and the internet took over, now you could go to Armystudyguide and lo and behold, NCOER bullets. Why be original when look at one that's close enough to what you "need" change a few words and BAM!! There is your "excellence" bullet. I know I was guilty of doing that on my NCOER's a few times, and had to explain it too. I think having to explain WHY I did something rather than sit there racking my mind for "good catch phrases" and "code words", made me understand it a little more. One situation that really brought the house down was at a NCODP where the SGM was talking about NCOERS (go figure). He pulls out his "example" NCOER and begins reading the bullets on it to us. There are about 40 or so NCOs from E5-E9 in the room. This SGM was reading and critiquing the bullets off another SGM's NCOER while the SGM was in the room! The reason some of us knew who it belonged to was that some of the bullets were VERY specific to what we did and our BN's mission, so there was NO doubt who it was (it was confirmed the second she left the room by her facial expression). I felt embarrassed for our SGM to have another BN's SGM blatantly disrespect her in our presence and laugh when she left. That was not the way to teach anyone by grinding an ax in front of her troops. I kinda fell off track, but long story short, they told us that the bullets were not "excellence" but "success" based on their opinions. This is NOT how to teach NCO's how to write them by degrading a fellow SGM for the hell of it and not liking her. After a two hour session the ONLY thing we learned is how to watch two SGM's disrespect one of their own in public. Writing a good NCOER takes vision on both the rater and the ratee. You have to do shit to put in there, and I know from HARD experience the "fluffer" bullets won't make it. Using the web to take a bullet also will put some crosshairs on you from your SNCO's because if you think you're the ONLY one who knows of that "site" you're dead wrong and about to find out when that red pen writes "come see me with your NCO". There was a AG SGM from DA who wrote a pamphlet on how to write a NCOER. I had that thing for years! She was GOOD, and it wasn't written in a manner that would bore you to death. We need to get back to teaching the "Art" of writing. Not sure how this will work out with the new NCOER, but the NCO's of the future need it just like we did. To my AF brethren....I HATE WRITING YOUR EVALS!! Freakin white space....gotta fill the white space. Gotta use "certain" words at "certain" times, and I was given a list of those words. Navy wasn't as bad as the AF. Don't forget "Firewall Fives"!! I would pull my eyebrows out before ever trying to write a AF eval again in life.
(2)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
Avatar feed
Is it appropriate to write your own NCOER when asked to?
SSG S1 Personnel Ncoic
2
2
0
I refuse to make one of my nco's write their own NCOER or award. That is a leadership fail if you are asking your nco's to do that. A support form is there for a reason and it should be used quarterly. If it is used it will help you write the NCOER. I see this far to often and it is nco's being lazy and not taking their time and giving guys what they deserve and that is good leadership.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
CSM Elmer Feick Jr.
2
2
0
Edited >1 y ago
Unfortunate as it is, this happens way too often. Everyone who has responded would agree that this is a reflection of poor leadership and does not in any way represent the evaluation system as it was designed for. I think it is important to note that if your Rater is asking you to write your own NCOER, then the assumption is that the requisite periodic counseling is not taken place as well.
That said, if your Rater is not tracking your periodic counseling dates there is nothing that says you could "professionally" remind them that he//she has a responsibility to do so. This keeps your Rater honest and in most cases will prevent the "can you write your own NCOER?' at the end of the rating year situation.
In any case, you should always documents rating achievements throughout the year...a suggestion is that you create a word document mirroring the NCOER. This way, if your Rater is not tracking your accomplishments or not doing the requisite periodic counseling's, at least then you have a record your rating accomplishments. Also , if you have additional duties and responsibilities, make sure your Rater provides bullet comments on those as well...an area of the report that is often overlooked.
(2)
Comment
(0)
SGM Steve Wettstein
SGM Steve Wettstein
>1 y
CSM Elmer Feick Jr. Brother that is what I would do most of time. My reminder would be my page one finished for them and a bunch of suggestions for bullets. In reference to additional duties, I was taught and went by if it gets mentioned on page one it should have a bullet on page two. If not it is just some BS to make your NCOER look better.
(0)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
CSM Carl Cunningham
2
2
0
No. I still make my bosses counsel and write my eval. Now, I have much input to it, but I do not write it. I think it has helped me because I had an officer actually write mine instead of me writing it with the verbage that a lot of NCO's typically use. I know my NCOER's are different.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
SSG Squad Leader
2
2
0
SGM Mikel Dawson You are correct it is wrong and it is the lazy NCO/Officer that would ask you to do that. Now depending on your job or mission they may ask for certain things to put in your NCOER like how much of this did you do what were your totals in that. But that is all the NCOER is our job as leaders to do and to do properly. That is how we shape the army of tomorrow.
(2)
Comment
(0)
SSG Squad Leader
SSG (Join to see)
>1 y
SGM Steve Wettstein - From your level why do you say that this happens as often as it does, why do we as leaders fail our soldiers that we don't give them proper ratings and have them wright there own. I would love your insight on this SGM.
(1)
Reply
(0)
SGM Steve Wettstein
SGM Steve Wettstein
>1 y
SSG (Join to see) - I believe there are two reasons. 1) Some Raters are to damn lazy to do their job. B) Some Raters do not know how to properly write a good NCOER. A lot of it has to being a professional. I didn't have people do my work and I sure in the hell wasn't going to do theirs. Back when I was a PSG I could knock out a good NCOER that only needed minor changes in a couple of hours. During the same time I saw it take my peers a week to get the same thing done.
(1)
Reply
(0)
SSG Squad Leader
SSG (Join to see)
>1 y
SGM Steve Wettstein - sadly we don't put much time in WLC or ALC on the NCOER I have not been to SLC so I cant say about that but I would guess that they don't spend much time on it. It will take me a long time to do a good NCOER for one of my soldier. However it is worth the time to give solders a proper evaluation.
(1)
Reply
(0)
SGM Steve Wettstein
SGM Steve Wettstein
>1 y
SSG (Join to see) - I don't remember really getting into the NCOER at any of my NCOES courses. It is pretty much an NCOPD topic and a 1 on 1 teaching event. Most of the NCOs that I know that are really good NCOER writers were self and peer taught. That goes back to my earlier being a professional comment.
(1)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
SGM David W. Carr  LOM, DMSM  MP SGT
2
2
0
It is important to give constant input to insure accomplishments are reflected.
This should be easily documented during normal counseling sessions.
With subordinates on the initial counseling we would pencil in goals and objectives to be done during the rated period. So when they were met they became bullet comments unless something of high importance or greater value could replace them.
This way when it came time to complete the NCOER or write awards it was relatively painless
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
SSG Avenger Crew Member
2
2
0
Writing your own NCOER is NEVER appropriate, but has been done for a loooooong time. When you have a lazy rater that don't want to take the time to do their job, it's much easier for them to have the subordinate do it and they can "proof read" it. Pathetic really.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
SGM Steve Wettstein
2
2
0
SGM Mikel Dawson Brother I can't count how many times I was told this. I would generally laugh at them and tell them it wasn't going to happen and that it was their job to do it. Plus I could never write one for myself, I tried a couple of times but couldn't figure it out. I would give them bullet suggestions and do all of page one. I would also proof read whatever they would write for bullets.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
SSG Dwight Amey MSA, MSL, BS, AS
2
2
0
SGM Mikel Dawson, I have been told from time to time to get my NCOER "ready" for review. The frustrating part of the process was the two sided coin effect. I write the NCOER and am told to correct it not grammar but content. I am thinking, you told me to write it? Then, in my final NCOER I was really tick off when my platoon sergeant duties was written off. I realized I was not in the position with a line item. I was in the position because no one else wanted to do it. One NCO would flat out refuse to do it and get away with it without jeopardy to his career. I could not do that. This was a stab in my back. I got all the heat rounds, long hours, standing on the carpet, took soldiers to promotion boards, just to be taken off my Final NCOER as if I never did any of that off and on for 6 months or so. I scratch my head today.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
SFC Motor Transport Operator
2
2
0
never but I recently seen that being done by another NCO. He told his team leader to write it. I couldnt believe what i was seing.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
CW3 Network Architect
2
2
0
Both in active duty and in the Army Reserve, I wrote my own NCOER, with two exceptions. Those exceptions were both when I got raked over the coals. Raters and senior raters don't want to do their jobs, but they'll be happy to make you do yours if you have people under you.
(2)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
Capt Seid Waddell
2
2
0
Edited >1 y ago
I not only wrote drafts of my OERs, but drafts of endorsements so that the COC could choose to use one of them if they wished. I never minded it since I was detached for much of the time and my superiors had no opportunity to observe me on a daily basis. I always wrote my men's APRs and NCOERs myself though, since I worked with them daily.
(2)
Comment
(0)
SGM Mikel Dawson
SGM Mikel Dawson
>1 y
I can understand when a person is detached and not working directly under their rater. I know it happens, has to me as well.
(3)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
CSM Andrew Perrault
1
1
0
So probably safe to say they weren't getting counselled either......Poor and lazy leadership right there......I'd provide input and then report it up the chain.......
(1)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
1px xxx
Suspended Profile
No, it is not appropriate, ever. I'm kind of surprised that in the responses there is some agreement with the practice. The Army Regulation is quite clear on who should write the report, even better, it tells the responsible party what else they are to do, COUNSEL. If you are being asked to write your NCOER, or OER for that matter, I'm guessing you haven't been counseled properly. In my experience, leaders who ask Soldiers to write their report do not counsel. Be your own best advocate, INSIST that your rater counsel you properly, remind them during the year if that is what it takes, though you shouldn't need to. I wouldn't sign a NCOER with bogus dates, one where counseling hasn't been done, either, there is a way to handle that if that presents itself. You can refuse to write your report respectfully, I did so several times. Be prepared to provide input, though shouldn't need to if you've been counseled properly, it doesn't hurt to be involved. If your leader counsels appropriately NCOERs/OERs, and awards for that matter, should be easy to write.
SGM Robin Johnson
1
1
0
Edited >1 y ago
There are a lot of situations (especially when you are geographically dispersed or in low density MOSs) where even if you have been counseled the rater may not have as much knowledge as you do about all your achievements, or what achievements are actually the most noteworthy in your field. So there are a lot of ways it has been worded to get a draft ready (or provide input, or give some bullets...) and if you choose not to do so you certainly are not required to provide anything. Then the person can go off what is in your counseling and what they know of your performance and no more - and you get what you get. If your boss is giving you the opportunity to have a direct impact on what your record reflects and you choose to have that be the most complete and accurate reflection of your accomplishments, you can do that.

I always told the Soldiers I rated to provide me with any input they wanted me to have and gave them a deadline to get it in. They had the choice of just giving me a list to add to their counseling record, or providing me bullets with the understanding that I wouldn't necessarily use them the way they were written if I used them at all, or they could write their own NCOER if they wanted to with the understanding that I WOULD edit and change it to reflect my evaluation (and they could not mark the boxes). If they chose not to provide any input I just wrote it based on what I knew of their performance. Either way, they got called in as usual to review what I had before it was finalized. It was a learning experience for them however they chose to do it, every time (they were always surprised that I generally knew more of what they had done than they did, actually - or at least knew what they could take credit about that they left off.)

I never got bent out of shape either way. Some people have difficulty with written work - doesn't mean they are bad leaders, they just need assistance in that arena. We have to get each other's back. The more we help those who need it (by going over it with them, not doing it wholesale) the better they get at it.
(1)
Comment
(0)
SGM Mikel Dawson
SGM Mikel Dawson
>1 y
SGM Robin Johnson - On a side note: Did you know a SGM Beatty? Worked with him when he was with the V Corps.
(0)
Reply
(0)
SGM Robin Johnson
SGM Robin Johnson
>1 y
SGM Mikel Dawson I actually know TWO SGM Beatty's! Both medical. The one you are talking about - tall white guy?
(0)
Reply
(0)
SGM Mikel Dawson
SGM Mikel Dawson
>1 y
SGM Robin Johnson - We were deployed together from Jan 2003 - Feb 2004, OIF. Black guy, still had to complete the Non-res SGM course at that time.
(0)
Reply
(0)
SGM Robin Johnson
SGM Robin Johnson
>1 y
OK, know him too - I took over as MEDCOM EO SGM from him!
(0)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
SGM Chief Executive Officer (Ceo)
1
1
0
I was asked to write my own NCOER once by an Air Force Major, who wasn't really in my chain of command but was appointed as my rater. He was familiar with my work and that of my detachment (I was the NCOIC with no OIC). I told him I would be happy to provide him a list of accomplishments, but I would not write my own NCOER. If he didn't think enough about my performance to write it for me, then I didn't deserve to get one. He said that wasn't satisfactory, because he wasn't familiar enough with the Army system. I gave him a copy of the regulation and my last five NCOERs. I also happened to mention it to my Senior Rater, a crusty old Army Colonel, who was the Major's boss. Needless to say, but the Major wrote a glowing NCOER for me.

I also had a position with only civilians as my rater and senior rater. They really had never rated military personnel before, so I did give them extensive help, but I still did not write the NCOER for them. They were actually quite engaged in the process, spoke to my unit CSM and S1, read the regulation, and worked very hard to get it right.

The whole evaluation system, especially the newer system in place today, revolves around two major elements. First is the periodic counseling throughout the rated period, so there are no surprises when the NCOER is written. Both the NCO and the Rater are able to stay engaged over the period with how the NCO is progressing toward his or her goals and requirements established at the beginning of the rated period. Second, the NCOER itself should be a collaborative process. The NCO shouldn't write the NCOER, but should help write significant parts of it, based on discussions with the Rater about the goals and requirements, how the NCO progressed through the year, and the overall tone of the NCOER. The Rater should be making suggestions, asking questions, clarifying points, and collecting information. The NCO should then likely draft the report based on all those discussions, just to handle the administrative part of getting it on paper. Then, another discussion with the Rater to go over this draft construction to verify the information and ensure the Rater is satisfied everything is captured and accurate. Once any final corrections are made to the draft, it should be left in the hands of the Rater for final compilation, starting the signature process, and so forth.

This makes the process one of professional development, from the start of the rated period when the NCO and Rater agree on goals and requirements, and through the periodic counseling sessions when progress is discussed, any changes to goals and requirements are made, and additional guidance is given. At the end, the collaborative NCOER deliberative process I described helps both the Rater and NCO understand and ensure the NCOER is an accurate and realistic evaluation of the NCO's performance during the rated period. NOT using this kind of process shortchanges the individuals involved, the organization, and the entire Army. Each NCOER is a building block for the professional development of the entire NCO Corps. Looking at it as only one NCOER for one person, that doesn't really matter all that much is a serious dereliction of duty. IMHO, anyway.
(1)
Comment
(0)
SGM Mikel Dawson
SGM Mikel Dawson
>1 y
SGM (Join to see) Great post and I fully concur with it. We can be involved in the writing of our NCOERs, i.e. input, assisting and such, but the final product should come from our rater. You have shown how to over come difficulties.
(0)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small
CW3 Jim Norris
1
1
0
Had a couple of experiences like yours, I took a little different tack - fine you want me to write my own - well by golly I think I'm the best thing since sliced bread and you will to......I'm proud that I never placed any of 'my' folks in that position, always wrote an honest and fair eval.....once or twice maybe even cut a couple of folks more slack than they deserved. I've found that the ability to write an effective evaluation has assisted me in preparing business plans and proposals....so, the Army did me a service by helping me develop the ability to write a cohesive and cogent paragraph or two.....amazing how many struggle with the same.
(1)
Comment
(0)
Avatar small
CW5 Regimental Chief Warrant Officer
1
1
0
It completely removes the eval as a developmental tool but then again, it deviated from that purpose long ago anyway. It now serves as a tool for promotion only.
(1)
Comment
(0)
SGM Steve Wettstein
SGM Steve Wettstein
>1 y
CW5 (Join to see) Great points Chief.
(0)
Reply
(0)
Avatar small

Join nearly 2 million former and current members of the US military, just like you.

How are you connected to the military?
  • Active Duty
  • Active Reserve / National Guard
  • Pre-Commission
  • Veteran / Retired
  • Civilian Supporter